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Previously published stories from a work-in-progress Shrunken Heads, Miniature Portraits of the Famous Among Us

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Man with a Comb

6/10/2015

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"Man With A Comb" originally appeared in Amoskeag

He always carried a comb.  Of course back in the old days, when I first met him, we all carried combs.  A few years older than we, he set a standard for us.  Running a comb above his ears, he’d sweep his dark hair back on each side, then finish with a flip of the long wave over his forehead.  His comb held cool in every tooth.

After supper when the small town shops closed for the evening, he draped himself over a parking meter, deliciously disrespectful.  When he stood, slipped comb from pocket, and slid it through his hair, we admired his slick grace.  He performed this dance as if it were neither act nor art, and we pretended not to know.

Over the years our hair grew wild, then short, wiry, brushed, picked, let alone.  We left our combs behind.

Not he.  Nor did he change his hair style, frozen as it thinned, turned gray, receded, finally revealing a pool of scalp.

We were sure he was dead, his parking meter held up by his ghost, as empty as the deserted shops, closed now even at noon.  We drove down the old street, conjuring combs and grace, and then he emerged from the dark entryway of an old brick building with rooms by the week.

Shorter now, slump shouldered, part lines in his face, his hand shook with timid tremors as the comb made its tired journey.  We waved and called his name.  He waved back, the comb, as if forgotten, still in his hand.

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